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Lightly You Ride
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Lightly You Ride |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Are you, are you there...the lonesome whisper says. straining valiantly, gallantly to assert itself, to stand stalwart upon a bloodied mound where lives were lost...as warriors fought in honor of one, of one so beautiful that a heart halts and sighs upon the moment of sight, the moment of a pleasurable dance of a delicate perfume...circling, teasing, whispering as only a whisper might or may. Yes, I remember that moment, a tender and teasing moment of splendor and passion. A moment when a subtle knock brought to an ear a single gasp...a slight but perceptable shudder as a tear wells and falls silently into a rain's coffer...a watering place where eyes close and the bubbles softly escape, as emeralds and pearls of air rise to the earthen air above... Yes, how could I ever...when the thought of you, of your whisper teasing my ear makes me cry and sit for hours, looking, hoping to some day see the flow of your locks dancing with the tail of a steed...as lightly you ride... Inspired... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice to read...really liked this line: "of one so beautiful that a heart halts and sighs upon the moment of sight," |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good grief man! This just embraced me tightly and wouldn't let go! I do love it when you get inspired! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Barry, please come in more often! You are beautifully inspired here. Enjoyed this much! Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Are you, are you there...the lonesome whisper says. straining valiantly, gallantly to assert itself, to stand stalwart upon a bloodied mound where lives were lost...as warriors fought in honor of one, of one so beautiful that a heart halts and sighs upon the moment of sight, the moment of a pleasurable dance of a delicate perfume...circling, teasing, whispering as only a whisper might or may. Yes, I remember that moment, a tender and teasing moment of splendor and passion. A moment when a subtle knock brought to an ear a single gasp...a slight but perceptable shudder as a tear wells and falls silently into a rain's coffer...a watering place where eyes close and the bubbles softly escape, as emeralds and pearls of air rise to the earthen air above... Yes, how could I ever...when the thought of you, of your whisper teasing my ear makes me cry and sit for hours, looking, hoping to some day see the flow of your locks dancing with the tail of a steed...as lightly you ride... Inspired... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your poetry could be deemed... timeless. A fan.  |
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