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Candle burning low
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Candle burning low |
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Snaggy New Member
since 2008-05-28
Posts 4 |
Fire flashes in my eyes as my fingers go numb I'm not what you remember that boy has died my hands moves though the flame as it flickers in the dark the pains makes me flinch but the pain you gave me it makes me fall to my knees but i dont cry nor i ever shall just another night sitting on the floor candle wax burning low |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting write with much too think about...my favorite part: "just another night sitting on the floor candle wax burning low" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
sorry for your pain! maybe the warmth of friendship can mend the hurt...so you won't get burnt anymore... enjoyed.... candles can be romantic when shared! |
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