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Duncan
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0 posted 2008-02-07 09:18 PM



Struggling to hold back
sweet dirt’s desire
to cross bitten lip

I allow myself a moment
of evil pleasured imagery
hoping to open
some rage escape tap

just enough
to satisfy
the want, the cry
for vengeance

just shy
of assuming
too much of it’s execution
as mine to exact

It is only
a healthy fear
of karma
that restrains my will,
otherwise

You’d lie bloody
at my feet



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-02-07 09:34 PM


yer in my head

*chuckle*

and on the page too, so that is schizmatic, which basically proves the point.

Dayum Dunc...

I dunno what made you do it, I'm just glad y'did.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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2 posted 2008-02-07 10:08 PM


I blamed it last week  ...... TWICE!!!

still haven't found what I'm looking for either ...

truly felt this!

Ct

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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3 posted 2008-02-08 07:29 AM


Karma works both ways, yanno?  They will get theirs...and when they do?  Call me!

It makes me happy that you posted, it's been too long.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2008-02-08 09:05 AM


Is it really you? or a Memory X trick?
Whatever the reason for the fist-clenching,
I'm glad lady Karma sits on your shoulder.
*grinning here today*
Kacy

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with you
5 posted 2008-02-08 09:48 AM


ohhhhhhhhhhhh yes... know this feeling well...nice nice nice!
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-08 10:03 AM


Duncan! You're back with a vengeance! ~ so to speak!

"It is only
a healthy fear
of karma
that restrains my will,"

~ Aye, it'll do it every time ~ if you happen to have a healthy respect for karma! ~ Which I do! ~ both good and bad!

Gosh, I could feel anger boiling up inside of me as I read your powerful ~ yet restrained ~ words!

Very good writing, Sir Dunk!

It would appear that there is someone who has done you wrong and that he/she will have to face the piper and reap some pretty bad karma!

As for me, I am trying my 'damndest' to be a good little 'angel' ~ well, at least most of the time!

Giving you a big, warm, welcome-back hug,

Linda

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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7 posted 2008-06-19 03:23 AM


Wow... powerful write, Duncan...

It's so good to read you again...
it's been much too long...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-06-19 09:40 AM


Welcome home, hon...




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