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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america 
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Speeding away never coming back your car is leaving way too fast will you come back this time? do you even care false promises one more night i'm scared one o'clock two o'clock where could you be? i sit and wait for you my mother, no one else but me |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Interesting. I feel the mother as if she is earth here. Enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very well rendered deep melancholy. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
deeply poignant...so many levels of expression...nicely done |
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