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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-04-04 01:40 AM


you said hurry back
from whatever it was
I had to do without you
and that we should not
waste our time waiting
but leave that to others
who prefer living without loving
and laughter without meaning

it was then...
the essence of your
hurry back words
were understood



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-04 02:06 AM


See, darlin', I did peek in to read your poem.  It was well worth the peek.  

Love,
A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-04-04 02:12 AM


thank you my sweet Ali-girl... you are the best! love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-04-04 06:15 AM


Wonderful...one of your best...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-04-04 06:16 AM


ah James.. you really are delightful - thank you for reading my work... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

simon
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5 posted 2008-04-04 08:03 AM


Roniece,
the inside of your head must be such a lovely place. Enjoy your sharing and enjoyed this...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-04-04 08:14 AM


thanks Simon... sometimes the inside of my head gets a little crowded!  I do appreciate your comments though... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-04-04 08:30 AM


Enjoyed, Roniece.
              Ida

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8 posted 2008-04-04 01:07 PM


very lovely. very lovely. smile and more smile for the unsaid.
beautiful.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-04-04 08:42 PM


Ida.. thank you lovely girl

Seoulair... thank you, I appreciate you reading my work...

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-04-04 09:40 PM



Roniece, I'm on my way,

well you said hurry back,

No just joking but I enjoyed your post.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-04-04 09:59 PM


Lindsay... you are very special! thank you x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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12 posted 2008-04-05 04:11 AM


Romantic Delightful Beautiful..if these are the thoughts that crowd your busy mind, you should have a clear out more often! Hurry back...  John
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13 posted 2008-04-05 04:28 AM


push, it feels good, very nice.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-04-05 05:05 AM


John... ooh now I could get used to you calling me by those names! My work colleagues call me RDB and I always thought they meant Really Delightful Blonde - only to find out they had changed the delightful to Dumb!! LOL oh well, at least I could see the funny side and sometimes I do have my blonde moments that's for sure!! LOL

Redheart...thank you for leaving a comment, much appreciated.  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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15 posted 2008-04-05 05:44 AM


Delightful, dear Roniece! And now that the essence is understood ... FLY! Love wants to be lived.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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16 posted 2008-04-05 07:02 AM


ms r&b..sounds like a chance as something lovely..hope you decide to get close there..enjoyed this slice of you
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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17 posted 2008-04-05 10:47 PM


Margherita... you always encourage me to reach for the stars.. thank you x

Mr Daark... I think you bring out the lovely in us all.. thank you x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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18 posted 2008-04-07 02:30 AM


Hurry back , Such wonderful words to hear


Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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19 posted 2008-04-07 03:32 AM


thank you Hope for your lovely comment love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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20 posted 2008-04-07 12:45 PM


hello roniece, your words weigh a lot...
  Thanks

   yann

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21 posted 2008-04-07 09:45 PM


ouuuu! you write good! Roniece!!!



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22 posted 2008-04-08 12:55 PM


WOW!!!! This is gorgeous RDB… absolutely gorgeous.

Tammy<333

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23 posted 2008-04-08 03:26 AM


This is touching Roneice...I felt the pang of "what happened to us" in this.

smile

only a veteran of love knows this.


jessie
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24 posted 2008-04-08 03:43 AM


such a beautiful poem full of meaning
and as you say you write from the heart
you sure do.the word melted together and flowed

great work


Susan Caldwell
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25 posted 2008-04-08 07:58 AM


sometimes the hurry back takes a lifetime..

something in this stirred me...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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26 posted 2008-04-08 11:19 AM


nice read
Robert Frazier
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27 posted 2008-04-08 01:56 PM


this is so good!  

Hugs,
R

Virtual Abyss
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28 posted 2008-05-29 12:16 PM


Beautiful!

Thank you!

Sincerely,

Virtual Abyss


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29 posted 2008-05-29 12:34 PM


don't know how I missed this before -- it is so good...so rich with meaning, so beautiful in content
Ray Sharpe
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30 posted 2008-05-29 02:59 AM


a lovely sentiment ...well written about...I really enjoyed this piece.

Earth Angel
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31 posted 2008-05-29 09:06 PM


Love's skies are now clear and blue ~ Fly high! Fly free! Enjoy what love has to offer you!


Linda

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32 posted 2008-05-29 09:24 PM


very fine!
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