Open Poetry #42 |
You said hurry back... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you said hurry back from whatever it was I had to do without you and that we should not waste our time waiting but leave that to others who prefer living without loving and laughter without meaning it was then... the essence of your hurry back words were understood Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
See, darlin', I did peek in to read your poem. It was well worth the peek. Love, A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you my sweet Ali-girl... you are the best! love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...one of your best...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah James.. you really are delightful - thank you for reading my work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Roniece, the inside of your head must be such a lovely place. Enjoy your sharing and enjoyed this... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks Simon... sometimes the inside of my head gets a little crowded! I do appreciate your comments though... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed, Roniece. Ida |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very lovely. very lovely. smile and more smile for the unsaid. beautiful. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ida.. thank you lovely girl Seoulair... thank you, I appreciate you reading my work... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Roniece, I'm on my way, well you said hurry back, No just joking but I enjoyed your post. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lindsay... you are very special! thank you x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Romantic Delightful Beautiful..if these are the thoughts that crowd your busy mind, you should have a clear out more often! Hurry back... John |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
push, it feels good, very nice. Kindly, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... ooh now I could get used to you calling me by those names! My work colleagues call me RDB and I always thought they meant Really Delightful Blonde - only to find out they had changed the delightful to Dumb!! LOL oh well, at least I could see the funny side and sometimes I do have my blonde moments that's for sure!! LOL Redheart...thank you for leaving a comment, much appreciated. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful, dear Roniece! And now that the essence is understood ... FLY! Love wants to be lived. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b..sounds like a chance as something lovely..hope you decide to get close there..enjoyed this slice of you |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita... you always encourage me to reach for the stars.. thank you x Mr Daark... I think you bring out the lovely in us all.. thank you x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hurry back , Such wonderful words to hear Hope |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Hope for your lovely comment love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello roniece, your words weigh a lot... Thanks yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ouuuu! you write good! Roniece!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
WOW!!!! This is gorgeous RDB… absolutely gorgeous. Tammy<333 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is touching Roneice...I felt the pang of "what happened to us" in this. smile only a veteran of love knows this. |
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jessie Junior Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 44AUSTRALIA. |
such a beautiful poem full of meaning and as you say you write from the heart you sure do.the word melted together and flowed great work |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
sometimes the hurry back takes a lifetime.. something in this stirred me... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
this is so good! Hugs, R |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
Beautiful! Thank you! Sincerely, Virtual Abyss |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
don't know how I missed this before -- it is so good...so rich with meaning, so beautiful in content |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
a lovely sentiment ...well written about...I really enjoyed this piece. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love's skies are now clear and blue ~ Fly high! Fly free! Enjoy what love has to offer you! Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very fine! |
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