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Open Poetry #42
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Yvette
Junior Member
since 2007-12-08
Posts 19
Texas, United States
0 posted 2008-02-07 05:08 PM

A little too much like us
yet, way too much like them
Bird with a broken leg
spindle dancing on the fence

Don't fit in with us
Yet, will never fit in with them
powder blown off of her wings
white blur pounding upon the dim

We are driving her out
They won't let her in
Bird with a broken leg
spindle dancing on a whim.
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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-02-07 05:33 PM

I would love to know the inspiration behind this one.  Interesting write!
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-02-07 05:40 PM

Mysterious yet captivating.

Margherita
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-07 05:52 PM

Mysterious Indeed



ARCTIC WIND
ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2008-02-07 07:59 PM

I imagined a saddened sight,
   that of a fowl night
the cold baring loss
   of a bird with no flight

.... this had a lot to say in just a few words,
   enjoyed!

Ct

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