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Open Poetry #42

Withering heights (with Ctowen)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-02-03 07:34 AM

Some die on the sycamore


as she harkens to


November's fall




some relent in stillborn form


and some just destined in utero



some regret in ashes pool


of sparks that rose the lover's fool




wiltered wounds take the toll


ravished by his seasoned wind


a burden's caress


life taking and on growing




seeds of another ...


welcoming clear skied tears,


clouds of endless thought




so the cirrus do applaud


and some may just feel bitter rains,




yet love and lust


would be without


when storms of heart


would just refrain




and those sparks


ignite heaven's glow




coupled with the spent storm


torrid in a sense,


the air now tendered, rushed

..... breathless

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2008-02-03 07:50 AM

ms inky, I so enjoy your windows

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-02-03 08:05 AM

a wonderful blending of two voices
from first nurturing breath to final sigh

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-02-03 09:21 AM

Unique and unison in voice and spirit.
You look upon the seasons and reasons with resilience.

Great write!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-02-03 10:33 AM

Wonderful blending of two of the finest Poets!

Profound and captivating.

love
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-03 11:39 AM

Great Write indeed

ARCTIC WIND

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2008-02-03 11:51 AM

Thank you all for the compliments ....

writing with Mish is like being taken by Storm,
I would suggest to anyone to write with her atleast once.
It would be a Life Time in the making!

Thanks for requesting to write with you once again!

Craig

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-02-03 12:46 PM

the pleasure is mine
thankyou

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2008-02-07 07:46 PM

I was waiting for your next solo to comment on the pleasure, but I couldn't contain myself! : )

Let me know "When" ....

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