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Open Poetry #42

Pimp That Ride/Fix That Nose

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

0 posted 2008-02-07 03:32 PM

Queen for a day,
Win a lottery,
What we teach our kids
Is a mockery.

Video games
Hip Hop crap
Disguised as music
(Try humming rap)

Material things
"Cribs" owned by trash
Glorious cars
From rapper's cash.

Nip and Tuck
That's all you need
A little "coke"
A puff of weed.

A fancy car
Luxury mansion
Brand new breasts
To see attraction.

Instead of wheels
(That gleem with spinners)
Perhaps some college
Would produce more winners?

What are we teaching
To our teens?
There's better ways
To self-esteem.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-07 03:36 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2008-02-07 04:01 PM

Hear, hear...oh I wish our youth would!

My credit's not Bad...I'm just protecting myself from identity theft!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2008-02-07 04:28 PM

all I can say is "I agree"...

there are no consequences anymore and look at all the video games etc.. so much is violent today...they are now saying that teens don't have the ability to distinguish the repercussions of their actions...

There is always an excuse today for poor choices in behavior.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-07 04:31 PM

Nice...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-02-07 10:36 PM

Way to say it!
I agree with all my heart.

A

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2008-02-07 10:39 PM

wll put...

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-02-08 05:59 AM

Toerag for President, then you'd sort 'em out!

Much enjoyed, well done

John

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2008-02-08 01:28 PM

I think you are right and said it so well.
Ida

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

9 posted 2008-02-08 01:56 PM

love the last S.
enjoyed.

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