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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-05-23 06:06 AM



  Foreplay...

started yesterday.

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gilead
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1 posted 2008-05-23 01:29 PM


Foreplay . . .

started yesterday

Never has so much been said, by so few words in a singular poem!  

Enjoyed immensely!

Art


Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-23 02:32 PM


Dear Serenity blaze,

It's always good to get an early start on such matters.

Love Bobby

Martie
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3 posted 2008-05-23 05:55 PM


Mmmmmmm, as it should be.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-05-23 06:23 PM


Egads, girl! Whatchya doin' takin' time out to write this teaser! Get back to what you wuz doin'!


Linda

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5 posted 2008-05-23 06:40 PM


Seren.-
I love it. Your poem made me laugh and I must say that I adore your uncharactoristically concise wit.

Oh and the longer the better-at least in my opinion.


~J.

[This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (05-23-2008 08:05 PM).]

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-05-23 07:43 PM


Nice...James
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7 posted 2008-05-23 07:52 PM


This better not be lessons in golf
Michael G
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8 posted 2008-05-23 07:59 PM


Ah yes.........perfect

Michael

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9 posted 2008-05-23 08:51 PM


Wow!
1slick_lady
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10 posted 2008-05-23 09:38 PM


once again i'm late
and missed out on lesson 1

#&%$

Jaime Fradera
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11 posted 2008-05-24 01:35 AM


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
sweet serenety Karen!!!!!
I saw this and opened it, looking forward to reading to see what you might have to teach me and other guys.
You got me all interested and what did I feel on my Braille display???
Just a few words ...   You have to make me use my imagination!
I guess maybe there is a picture for the write?
But that's okay ... can't fall asleep right now anyway.
How you doin down there in New Orleans?
There isn't much going on with me right now, and I feel rather awkward writing people just to say there isn't much to say.
I just popped another med if it may help me fall asleep.  But it's okay it's a prescription.
But I may be blazing away in my dreams.
Hugs
J

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12 posted 2008-05-24 02:55 AM


Hey, I am laying out money for an advance copy!

A

Margherita
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13 posted 2008-05-24 03:43 AM


Concise advice! To be taken seriously.

Nobody will fall asleep during this lesson with the sweet promises it holds ...


You did a great job with this one, dear Karen!

Love,
Margherita

vandana
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14 posted 2008-05-24 11:48 AM


enjoyed
Claira
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15 posted 2008-05-24 01:41 PM


Although I don't want the foreplay to end, I'm looking forward to lesson 2

Brilliant.

Claira

OwlSA
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16 posted 2008-05-24 02:39 PM


This should be on the front page of all men's magazines!

- Owl

latearrival
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17 posted 2008-05-24 06:05 PM


You are right on target. Foreplay should start with the good bye kiss in the morning and go on from there. How many are quilty of a flip "bye, see ya tonight" and go off to the day ahead with no other thought until  later that night, again with no sweet hello. You know the rest. Karen you are a master.  Open class and teach it right. "late"
serenity blaze
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18 posted 2008-05-24 09:04 PM


smile...

and wicked laughter

if I can remember..there might be a Lesson II.

*cackle*

I do love you all...lawsy, I do!

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