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Making Love: Lesson I
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Making Love: Lesson I |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Foreplay... started yesterday. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Foreplay . . . started yesterday Never has so much been said, by so few words in a singular poem!  Enjoyed immensely! Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Serenity blaze, It's always good to get an early start on such matters. Love Bobby |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mmmmmmm, as it should be.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Egads, girl! Whatchya doin' takin' time out to write this teaser! Get back to what you wuz doin'!  Linda |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Seren.- I love it. Your poem made me laugh and I must say that I adore your uncharactoristically concise wit. Oh and the longer the better-at least in my opinion.   ~J. [This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (05-23-2008 08:05 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This better not be lessons in golf  |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Ah yes.........perfect Michael |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Wow! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
once again i'm late and missed out on lesson 1 #&%$ |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! sweet serenety Karen!!!!! I saw this and opened it, looking forward to reading to see what you might have to teach me and other guys. You got me all interested and what did I feel on my Braille display??? Just a few words ... You have to make me use my imagination!I guess maybe there is a picture for the write? But that's okay ... can't fall asleep right now anyway. How you doin down there in New Orleans? There isn't much going on with me right now, and I feel rather awkward writing people just to say there isn't much to say. I just popped another med if it may help me fall asleep. But it's okay it's a prescription. But I may be blazing away in my dreams. Hugs J |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey, I am laying out money for an advance copy! A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Concise advice! To be taken seriously. Nobody will fall asleep during this lesson with the sweet promises it holds ... You did a great job with this one, dear Karen! Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Although I don't want the foreplay to end, I'm looking forward to lesson 2  Brilliant. Claira |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This should be on the front page of all men's magazines! - Owl |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You are right on target. Foreplay should start with the good bye kiss in the morning and go on from there. How many are quilty of a flip "bye, see ya tonight" and go off to the day ahead with no other thought until later that night, again with no sweet hello. You know the rest. Karen you are a master. Open class and teach it right. "late" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... and wicked laughter if I can remember..there might be a Lesson II. *cackle* I do love you all...lawsy, I do!  |
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