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Open Poetry #42

the puck and so on

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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0 posted 2008-05-22 11:46 AM

he calls the puck
then slides away,
he scores a goal,
the crowd is happy
like a child
on Christmas Day,
They are united
they share the time.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (05-23-2008 10:04 AM).]

simon
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since 2008-01-14

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London, England

1 posted 2008-05-22 12:05 PM

enjoyed...
jubilation leads to celebration
very quiet when you're on your own
or very loud when you're in a crowd.

gilead
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since 2008-03-10

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2 posted 2008-05-22 01:01 PM

Very nice read, yann. I like the idea of unity on Christmas day, or any day for that matter.

Art

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-05-22 06:05 PM

GOAL!!!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-05-22 07:09 PM

Very good write, dear Yann.

I am always amazed at those contemporaneous explosions of jubilation for a goal.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-05-23 10:03 AM

THank you Simon, for your nice comment...As a fan of hockey I enjoy to write about that..

yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-05-23 10:06 AM

THank you Art, I like the idea of unity among men and women for peaceful matters.

yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-05-23 10:08 AM

Hi Artic wind, withn your comment a big laughter is born...

THank you twice

yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2008-05-23 10:08 AM

Hi Margherita.
Yhanks for  your comment,
  LOve

   yann

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-05-23 11:13 AM

Can sense the joy and jubilation in this one!

He scores! lol

Linda

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2008-05-23 11:49 AM

Yo Yann,

This is well written. I don't care much for watching hockey, however I enjoyed playing it whe I was a kid.

Bobby

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