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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-05-20 07:10 PM

Accumulation of Moments

There was a moment when
I knew you were the one.
It was the moment when
I heard yor voice and
upon looking at the woman
that spoke to me,
you seemed so nice
in your white dress,
embracing your tan skin.
So nice was your black ponytail
reaching out for me to touch it,
and I did touch you with
the very essence that
the moment offered to me.
Before that moment, before
that accumulation of moments
I was a lost poet,
with few words to write,
but now the words flow
onto the pages as
delightfully as
our nights.

JamesLee
20May
2008

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-05-20 08:58 PM

JamesMichael- I really Enjoyed this Write!

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-05-20 10:16 PM

What a tribute to the Muse that inspires such verse. Your ability to transform a single event into an ephinany is one thing I enjoy in your writing. I think yor should be your. Pleasure to read as always.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned" J.C. Macauley

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-05-21 09:20 AM

Thank you Artic Wind and shyvl for the wonderful responses...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-05-21 11:10 AM

I think this is one of my favorites of yours

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-05-21 09:34 PM

Thank you passing shadows...it is always nice when someone says it is a favorite...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2008-05-22 07:16 PM

Delightful, dear James! Your romantic side is always highly enjoyable.

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2008-05-23 12:24 PM

nice write...delightful imagery

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

8 posted 2008-05-23 12:52 PM

Subtle, unforced emotion---a fine read!

Art

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2008-05-23 01:46 PM

awesome, James, many poets will recognize with your poem, I do....

thanks

yann

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