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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-05-22 06:02 AM

we discovered the seventh day by accident
almost lost in a storm of warm wanting
but we stopped our sinful worship momentary
long enough to consume our communion

of french fries and ice cream ketchup
as you played in our church room too
marking my temple with tooth graffiti
and getting my hand fulls as payback

we heard the children of us laughing
and we knelt and said our prayers
beside the bed that barely fit us
when we pretended cowboys and doctors

and undid each other's healing
with our own special kind of salvation
screaming out and chanting forgiveness
in those moments before our storms

when we both were gods of equal value

_______________

daark

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-05-22 06:06 AM

D

You know, I really missed your poetry and see that I have a lot to catch up on. This is the perfect one to take me to sleep though. I love it.

Thank you for you.

A

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2008-05-22 06:14 AM

storms are such lovely things.

Enjoyed you here Dark

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

3 posted 2008-05-22 06:45 AM

I absolutly love this! A fascinating piece...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-05-22 07:18 AM

Ms ali_san. Thanks lil gypsy am glad you are back.

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Ms GS. Thanks lady for the stormwatch
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Simon thanks for your read and reply.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-05-22 06:51 PM

quote:
and undid each other's healing
with our own special kind of salvation
screaming out and chanting forgiveness
in those moments before our storms

when we both were gods of equal value

Unequaled, spellbinding poetry, dear D.!!

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2008-05-23 09:27 AM

sounds like a smorgasbord
sans a spoon
2 yums up

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-05-29 12:07 PM

your writing Mr Daark is exquisite and beautiful as always... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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