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Open Poetry #42

how to make soap

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2008-05-21 08:03 PM

captured like an idiot
fallen down
scraped knees
wounded hands
laughing out loud
wonderment of breath
lust of touch
complete my insanity.
it was that
first instant touch
polite may I
hug into kiss
electric shock
therapy to a
wasted heart long
ago forgotten.
Brainiacs UNITE!
is the touch stupid
the suttle spark
of power
transferd between
lovers on a binge
as they radiate
passion.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2008-05-21 11:33 PM

very cool

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

2 posted 2008-05-22 06:48 AM

very interesting...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-05-22 07:39 PM

I gotta admit--the title actually scared me a little, but after seeing that you were going for the lather, I feel very relieved.

I mean, soap can be a ...well. sigh. shudder

Nice job with this--I'm looking forward to the follow up--

how to blow bubbles

(as you can see, I enjoyed) ty...

RC Langill
Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 104

4 posted 2008-05-22 11:25 PM

quote:

wonderment of breath
lust of touch
complete my insanity.

Continue taking mad delight in feeding our insanity.

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