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Twilight |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Nothing No thought Or feeling The sun is setting In the Western sky Finally Silently I understand I have been Quietly listening To your absence All day . |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Your style is unmistakable and expertly penned. I enjoy your flow of ideas in simple phrases, always ending in sincere reflection. Pleasure to read. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I like the scene of Twilight! Such beauty to the eyes... dont ya think!  ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
as always, an enjoyable read...love the way you pack so much meaning in so few words...truly a craftsman |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Now this is food for thought...it is what we choose to listen to isn't it????  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You are always on top. For this one, A deep, long curtsy to you. "late" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
To miss someone's presence so much as to make absence come alive in a poem---sunset, silence, solitude, absence. A remarkable achievement! Art |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it as always |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The sadness is palpable, the poem is lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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