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Golden Seashore
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Golden Seashore |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Golden Seashore The sun sets, lavishing its color on the sand Enthralling sea and sky to blend into golden hush Dancing starlight flickers ocean face Time takes on texture, flowing softly in its fabric The burden and tonnage of chaotic days still Untangling there hold, to succumb to the fawn of deliverance Making up sounds of anticipation, yanked by the collar my soul To turn eyes wide and open looking into waves of sanity Majesty, is dressed to be the silken sighs of a golden seashore Copyright Kkh 5/17/08 |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Kathleen, you so inspire me. How wonderful it would be to look at life through your eyes if even for a day. Beautiful. Rich |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pure beauty makes me wanna go watch the sunset at the beach |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Majesty, is dressed to be the silken sighs of a golden seashore" Beautiful and indeed you are right! |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
your poem is truly a diamond in a golden setting...i enjoyed it...thank you for sharing those thoughts. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine imagery here!... I am most fond of: “The sun sets, lavishing its color on the sand Enthralling sea and sky to blend into golden hush Dancing starlight flickers ocean face Time takes on texture, flowing softly in its fabric…” Applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh, truly exquisite, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this, my friend. jimmy |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always Lovely! ARCTIC WIND  |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This poem was so hauntingly touching to my soul. I find your reflections and the imagery you used a tranquil journey to some wonderous place. Thank you for sharing your own delightful visions. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
as splendid as any diamond ... inspiring indeed! Ct |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is simply lovely...loved this line best: "Time takes on texture, flowing softly in its fabric"...so poetically descriptive, btw, congrats on "Raspberry Murmurs" |
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