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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2008-05-19 06:31 PM



Clairvoyance

That intangible sensing
Wraps around me as sound and relevance
Something cool and thoughtful that is your essence
A soft stroke so profound as to create its own image
Moving fingers over me as if your touch
Printing warm the secret places left unraveled
Vision that makes alone time intimate
While you are away, inside my mind a unison of dream
Where I close my eyes, and feel your body near
Experience emotions so deep, that they breathe and whisper
Cause in corollary chills that soothe away disheartened day
Nothing could replace the joy of your smile
But on your write, another world is blessed within me
Given pause, to express as infinite potential
By reasons greater than merely I could comprehend

Copyright Kkh 5/19/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-20 05:46 AM


quote:
Vision that makes alone time intimate



Awesome poem in its whole and the above lines really are so true and soothing.

Just wonderful, dear TD!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-05-20 11:59 AM


"While you are away, inside my mind a unison of dream
Where I close my eyes, and feel your body near
Experience emotions so deep, that they breathe and whisper"

~ My goodness gracious, TD, I know whereof you speak ~ and I could scarcely breathe when I read your breath-taking words!


EA

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

3 posted 2008-05-20 12:02 PM


"But on your write, another world is blessed within me" . . . this pretty much sums it up!

Hugs,
R

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2008-05-20 12:38 PM


oh I so enjoyed this...read it several times...a gift...especially loved the alone time visions....

exceptional as always!

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