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Luskalilly
New Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 5
Kamloops, B.C Canada

0 posted 2008-05-19 10:06 AM



Im goin through a hardtime right now over a guy, And im no good at poems never have been but im tryin to write him one cause i luv them. This is all i have though of so far so let me know what u think or any changes before i send it to him.


I hate him, i love him
i want him to die, i want him to live
i need him he dont need me
I see him he dont see me
he loves her not me

You cant spell slaughter without laughter

© Copyright 2008 Marcy Greenwood - All Rights Reserved
r v wooo
Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

1 posted 2008-05-19 10:36 AM


welcome to#42...poetry must come from the heart...you don't want another to write it for you. if you don't feel comfortable writing a poem try a letter, a phone call or a face to face meeting and if necessary be willing to face the reality of a loss and move on...the loss of love is never easy...i know how it feels. i've been on the short end of the stick a few times and it ain't fun but i survived and found love again.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-05-20 11:42 AM


Hello, Luskalilly!

I feel for your situation. It's not an easy place to be in.

r v woo had some sage advice for you, and I concur.

Hope all works out for your Higher Good.

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,
Earth Angel

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