Open Poetry #42 |
Help maybe? |
Luskalilly New Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 5Kamloops, B.C Canada |
Im goin through a hardtime right now over a guy, And im no good at poems never have been but im tryin to write him one cause i luv them. This is all i have though of so far so let me know what u think or any changes before i send it to him. I hate him, i love him i want him to die, i want him to live i need him he dont need me I see him he dont see me he loves her not me You cant spell slaughter without laughter |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
welcome to#42...poetry must come from the heart...you don't want another to write it for you. if you don't feel comfortable writing a poem try a letter, a phone call or a face to face meeting and if necessary be willing to face the reality of a loss and move on...the loss of love is never easy...i know how it feels. i've been on the short end of the stick a few times and it ain't fun but i survived and found love again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Luskalilly! I feel for your situation. It's not an easy place to be in. r v woo had some sage advice for you, and I concur. Hope all works out for your Higher Good. Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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