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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-05-19 01:43 AM


Rum Fire Scene Night

We're live at the Ocean Front
party at Rum Fire and oh boy
its a joyous occasion.
The ladies are red hot
and gorgeous dance robots.

Oh look, there's three beauties
that might give me a
moment of their time.
Hello ladies, mind if I
take a picture, you're
having such a good time.

Tell me your names please,
so I can add them to this
picture; on the left is Brigitte,
in the middle Geselle, and to
the right Heide represents these
women of the night so well.

Thanks ladies, now how
about a glass of Grey Goose
to wet those luscious lips
and then we'll catch you
out on the dance floor
shaking those sexy hips.

JamesLee
17May
2008



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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2008-05-19 07:20 AM


Cool.
Enjoyed the read.  Melton

r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
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2 posted 2008-05-19 09:48 AM


go james, party down! enjoyed.
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
3 posted 2008-05-19 01:13 PM


Very lighthearted and enjoyable.  Thanks for sharing the good times.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-05-20 04:37 PM


Thank you 2dalimit, rv wooo and shyvl for the wonderful responses...James
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