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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2008-05-18 05:41 PM

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I want you

Excuse me
But I think
You must be
Mistaken

I need you now
In this moment
Of desire

I’m sorry   It’s late
And I’m very tired
And obviously
You’ve been drinking

Take me where
I want to go
Into the realm
Of carnal sin

Is this 202
No it’s 203

But feel free
To come back again


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
1 posted 2008-05-18 09:08 PM

this is one that I probably should not have a smile on my face after reading, but if you promise not to tell anyone that I enjoyed it, I will admit to it
shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-05-20 06:41 PM

The subtle humor makes me grin.  Thanks for the laughter.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley
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