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Zyskandar A. Jaimot Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 76FL-USA |
JAMES DEAN JAMES DEAN pouty lips smoking that cig... on that screen JAMES DEAN and i were never lovers but we could have been just like a car hurtles through night lights off dangerous - like that |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting poem! Welcome to Pip! Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Welcome To pip!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Zyskandar A. Jaimot Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 76FL-USA |
to M + AW - much thanks for the reads/comments glad u thought this was of interest regards zaj |
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Yvette Junior Member
since 2007-12-08
Posts 19Texas, United States |
Very brainstormy...refreshing breeze...bourderless...nice. |
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Zyskandar A. Jaimot Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 76FL-USA |
to y - much thanks for the read/comments glad it caused u to think regards zaj |
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1poeticjustice Junior Member
since 2008-02-04
Posts 14 |
Personal attack removed - Ron [This message has been edited by Ron (02-07-2008 07:28 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm not really sure what a "tanka" is, I confess, but I love James Dean, and you captured that elusive, rebellious, something with this. |
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Zyskandar A. Jaimot Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 76FL-USA |
to sb - much thanks for the read/comments a traditional oriental tanka would be a thought poem of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables with no title glad u enjoyed this regards zaj |
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