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Open Poetry #42

To Feel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-05-18 07:12 PM

To Feel
To feel
To touch
To love
To feel you
To feel your love
To feel your touch
To feel the warmth
of your love
To touch
To love you
And precious love
That feel your heart deeply
This is love
To feel
To touch
To love
To your heart
Once again
To see
To feel
To touch of your love

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

1 posted 2008-05-18 08:49 PM

the sense of touch can tell so much...if we can just learn...to feel.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-05-18 11:35 PM

The repitition seems almost to evoke the passion of the write...nicely done

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-05-19 01:30 AM

Enjoyed...James

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-05-19 01:20 PM

The repetition really moves this poem. I enjoyed it
sharyn

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-05-20 06:16 AM

Your heart, dear Vandana, overflows with love and you succeed in making the reader FEEL this love.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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