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Ri
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since 2008-02-01
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Blackburn, England

0 posted 2008-05-18 07:22 AM


Patters of pouring precipitation
Pounding perplexed puddles of reflection
Ripples converging in sweet connection
Life is lost with each raindrop’s vibration

Shadows sliding from the shining sunrise
Sinister concepts scarper from the heat
Silence pursuing with each sweet heartbeat
Life is gained with every shadow’s demise

Lightning fire fractures fragile forests
Forsaking finery for misfortune
Creatures will only be in sweet lore soon
Life is lost with endangered demolished

While weather will wander, swindling us all
We watch with wonder; life’s sweet rise and fall

© Copyright 2008 Rian Mercer - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-05-18 07:49 AM


Hello, Ri! Yes, Mother Nature certainly can be capricious! She's full of surprises. Some good ~ and some not so good!

I learned a new word from you! ~ "scapers" ~
I had to look it up. v.
1.  escape or flee; take to one's heels; cut and run

Thanks for adding a new word to my vocabulary! ~ and for this fascinating read!


EA

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-05-18 03:43 PM


lots of alliteration...I like Earth Angel had to look up scarper...like what makes me learn
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