Open Poetry #42 |
Sally Works It Different |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Sally works the street with Felix, in a most unusual way. She’s rather turned the normal street trade upside down. They’re both good looking kids, Sally’s the smarter of the two, and of course, she looks a little older. It doesn’t really matter though, as either way you cut it, life for them both, remains a total horror. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm glad Felix and Sally at least had each other. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, they certainly do have each other. They keep each other alive. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
It has been said that before order there is chaos, and I sometimes think that chaos is more intriguing than order---that which keeps luring us to the fire. I don't think Felix and Sally are afraid of the fire. Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Art, It's true, chaos may be more interesting, however, it's not always that much fun to be in it. There's not much that Sally and Felix are afraid of. Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Vandana, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Bobby I admire Sally and Felix for taking the game's own rules and twisting them so at least the two have a chance--and each other. Living the life they lead surely must be a horror, but they always seem to find a way to make a life together. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Sharyn, Thanks so much for saying that. You'll never know how much that means to Sally, Felix, and I. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I guess you could say that Sally and Felix were 'partners in crime' and were 'thicker than thieves'. ~ Sorry, Bobby, I couldn't help myself. I guess my 'halo' slipped! lol Another poignant penning. Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sad, but so true of some lives.... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, Well, you know how it is Hon. You gotta do what you gotta do. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear LeeJ, What you say is true Hon. It's good to see you. Love Bobby |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
What a way to find solace in an otherwise bad situation....in a jacked up screwed up sort of way. I like this one though. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Angel4aKing, I'm very pleased that you like this poem. Sally and Felix say hello. Love Bobby |
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