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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
“Here I stand, Watching you I am a man Too far and few Between these lines I see my fate And on this day I met my soul mate Upon first glance I noticed you You did the dance Only the devil knew You took my soul You took my heart All I ask is that you don’t tear them apart Now I sit here And wonder why You don’t notice me Why I don’t try” "Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time." |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Beautiful...welcome to passions I understand this all too well.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
lol I've posted a couple poems before, so I am not necessarily new. But thanks anyway! ^.^ Always happy to hear that someone likes my stuff.  "Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Be courageous...your own heart knows first! Nice write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
we notice you Rob..  wonderful words here.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps you should have approached her. A man who is able to write as sweetly as this, is surely a man worth noticing.   EA |
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