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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-05-15 06:48 PM



Into the Presence
of the Lord


Should you
be with me
when I die
just kiss me
goodbye
and accept my belief
that I'm going to be
with the Lord.

So let go of me tenderly
to show how much you care for me
and believe that my soul waits for yours
in the presence of the Lord.


JamesLee
20May
2008

For whosover shall call
upon the name of the Lord
shall be saved...Romans 10:13



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2dalimit
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1 posted 2008-05-15 07:16 PM


Comforting.

Thanks, Melton

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-15 08:44 PM


James,

This works rather well.  It's well done.

Bobby

Marilyn
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3 posted 2008-05-16 11:09 AM


Very true.

Marilyn

gilead
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4 posted 2008-05-16 02:51 PM


"Now faith is the substance of things hoped for . . . " ---Hebrews 11:1

So beautifully expressed.

Art

[This message has been edited by gilead (05-16-2008 04:10 PM).]

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2008-05-16 09:05 PM


A beautiful penning from you James.  Bless you for this lovely piece of writing.  
sewasham
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6 posted 2008-05-17 01:39 AM


Nice work James. Very comforting words. Take care and Have fun. Steve


passing shadows
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7 posted 2008-05-17 05:03 PM


now this is touching


r v wooo
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8 posted 2008-05-17 05:32 PM


admire your faith and the goodness in your heart...a touching poem, james.
Margherita
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9 posted 2008-05-17 07:33 PM


Dear James, you move me with these tender words full of serenity and divine trust.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-05-18 05:20 PM


Thank you 2 dalimit, Robert, Marilyn, gilead, Gentle Spirit, Sewasham, passing shadows, r v sooo and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James
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