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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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You love me silently and from a great distance, I am loud but don't care to fight the resistance of a self-made prison I myself once knew, I broke out recently and I need more of you. But you are there behind your bars and I'm far away dancing on stars, trying to find a love like yours, peeking into windows and rattling doors, trying to accept that you love silently, knowing you will never hand over the key. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
man oh man do I know this! loved it Dixie!!  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Interesting 'write!'... I am particularly fond of: "...you are there behind your bars and I'm far away dancing on stars, trying to find a love like yours, peeking into windows and rattling doors..." Applause!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Passing shadows, This is a very interesting poem. I rather like it. Keep on rattling those doors, you might wake someone up. Love Bobby |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Passing shadows love often happens to complete opposites. They puzzle each other together. This was a delight. Keep peeking in windows sharyn "God made you as you are |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Love silently from a distance , Dixie I can relate to that , in fact I had the key , I think he changed the lock Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dixie, this is quite powerful in content and poetical rendering! Love will knock at your door again and shine, dear beautiful poetess. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, Dixie, I am lovin' this poem. Sometimes, when I look up at the sky at night I think I see you dancing on your stars! xoxoxo A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi PS, your poem made me think a little bit about you... wish you to find the key, there is always one... yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But you are there behind your bars and I'm far away dancing on stars," ~ Gosh, Dixie, this poem would make for great country song lyrics! May you find the key to open a very loving, kind and adoring heart.  Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, Dixie. I enjoy your way of looking at life. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie - Some people don't even know what a "key" is let alone where to find it but we can love them anyway even from a distance. It certainly doesn't do any harm. Hugs Helen |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Very very very good,,,,, ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each your comments touch my heart |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
as always, extremely thought-filled writing...well done |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... I can relate my lovely lovely girl... you have expressed your thoughts well.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
human love...very complex...yet, at times, quite simple. i thing your situation is...hummm...i don't know. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
God! You just blow my mind sometimes with your writing, my friend...and THIS IS ONE OF THEM! Fantastic piece! jimmy |
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