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Your Ocean Sky
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Your Ocean Sky |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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As the day fell in forever and the fog began to clear I drove down to the beach so I could find a way to have you near I’m not sure why I did it It was totally Unplanned But then maybe it wasn’t, I don’t think I fully understand Perhaps I had the need to feel the grains of time beneath my feet And wonder if you felt it too where deep blue and your shoreline meet Each step was eons closer to the reasons of my love, for you Each moment was a silent vow that someday we could both renew Your essence is the canyon that your beauty carves into my sky Where rivers throb into the sea and closeness, never says, goodbye I had to know how sweet the breeze was, dancing in the air And just how I would hold you as it flowed throughout your silky hair Holding hands against the backdrop of a drowning sun Across the threshold of the night our love would soon become I saw the moon above and wondered If you saw it too The glow is the reflection of the love I have for you You are the swells within my eyes the ocean in my tear Your lips are like two secrets that my heart just has to hear I drove down to the ocean And I really don’t know why I think that I will stay the night And kiss your ocean sky Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A summer nights dream doesn't get much warmer than this!! Gee Richy, what a beautiful view this is. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Bluesy, but actually it's getting pretty cool out here. You wouldn't happen to know how to start a fire with two sticks now would you? (note to self: next time, bring blanket) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, dear Richy, you carry us on a wondrous and magical shore where love is expressed in a way every woman surely dreams of. An absolutely delightful poem from your most romantic heart! Such a joy to read. Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gorgeous write! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rich, I do it too wonderful feeling and poem! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Richy, this is absolutely dreamy and lovely writing! It cncompasses it all, love, hope, desire and dreams. Wonderfully done, sir. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I saw the moon above and wondered If you saw it too The glow is the reflection of the love I have for you" ~ Richy the Romantic, I ALWAYS enjoy reading you! It makes me feel good!  I am also a big fan of your comedic writes, as well! Big hug, Linda |
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onemoretry New Member
since 2008-05-10
Posts 5 |
I'm big on imagery when it comes to poetry and this one has it all. You evoke such a powerful visual with this work. I can see myself standing on that shore just as vividly as I can "see" the feelings that your words suggest. I would love to know that feeling again and reading this poem gives this sappy romantic hope lol. Well done!! I like this one A LOT - J |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Rich... your loving words are soooo beautifully put.. love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much everyone. You sure know how to make a fellah feel good! You're all the best! Rich |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, yes, my friend....I particularly like this.... "Where rivers throb into the sea and closeness, never says, goodbye" Wonderful piece jimmy |
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