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Autumnal Swoon
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Autumnal Swoon |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Oh Sweet face of Autumn gentle whispering of river Honeyed orb within your sky your fertile fields aquiver Let me sow my fondness tween the furrows, of your earth And guide my seed within your rows so passion deep inside gives birth Let us reap the wine of dreams that gathers from our tears Filling up the goblets of your love that I revere Let you take my harvest that I planted in your spring Give in unto me and let your bounty soon begin There will never be a frost nor fall of discontent The beauty of your foliage Is in concert with your scent My love for you comes deep within the wild of the call More than every leaf there ever was will ever fall Held between the summer’s glow and chill of winters vine You, the season of my heart Sweet Sunday Dream of mine Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! It was a pleasure trailing down the page. Helen |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I liked this overall, specially this: "And guide my seed within your rows so passion deep inside gives birth" |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Shall I compare this to a Summer's day--your comparison worked quite well even with the short stacato lines. "There will never be a frost nor fall of discontent" I give in to the hop e of love everlasting Hope you have yours. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Extraordinarily beautiful lines, dear Richy! You carry the reader into your dreamland and the view is very very enticing. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Richy! Autumn is not the only thing that is swooning! My heart be still ~ whether your words be metaphorical ~ or literal! lol Loved it!  Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
More than every leaf there ever was will ever fall Held between the summer’s glow and chill of winters vine You, the season of my heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A poem after my own heart~ Oh me, oh my~ You wrote this so nice Richy!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Another rich Richy gem! I loved it all, but especially the way you switched "The Call of the Wild." - Owl |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Helen ~ You can trail down my page anytime. Stevenr ~ Thank you for taking the time to read and review kind sir Sharyn ~ Keep hoping Sharyn, for me as well. Margherita ~ My dear I can feel your kindness from here. Linda ~ Am I hearing a giant Swooon from north of the border, I hope so Bluesy ~ A poem after your own heart? Well that just made my days! I’m so glad you liked it Lori! OwlSA ~ How sweet you are my friend! Thank you for kind words. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Richy, Never fear! I caught Linda before she hit the floor from her swoon! Beautiful. I can see why your poem got to her. Alison |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Alison ~ LOL! Yeah but who's going to catch me when I read her's? |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Richy that was absolutely gorgeous Claira |
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