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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-12 06:12 AM



lady of velvet guitar
strum your music there
at the shear speak beckon
of your moan song

know my eyes in shadows
as you learn his easy
wear my whispering linger
as you heal his laughter

bend your sigh songs slowly
over worshiping hands
press your frets to our minds
and slide their glide then

give us this day our pleasure


_____________

daark


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1 posted 2008-05-12 06:54 AM


D

Simply beautimous.  Words flowing along the sensuous path you take them on.

A

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2 posted 2008-05-12 11:34 AM


The internal rhymes and alliteration
do allow this song to sing sensuously...



Thanks for the pleasure...

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2008-05-12 02:07 PM


I always feel naked when I read you DS...

it's kind of awkward..

  

always lovely in your DS way.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-05-12 10:31 PM


ms ali-san, thanks little one

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ms sun, thanks special lady for the eyes


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ms susanC, it is ok, my eyes are closed, thank you for the whisper

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-05-13 03:54 AM


quote:
bend your sigh songs slowly
over worshiping hands
press your frets to our minds
and slide their glide then

give us this day our pleasure



The music I hear while reading your words is very tempting, dear D.! It seems we have a birthright to enjoy life, to be "given this day our pleasure" ... and you must know about this. We are often stuck in the vision of this "life being a valley of tears", we should more often attempt to dry these tears by giving and receiving pleasure.

Thank you for these morning meditations ...

Wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-05-13 05:50 AM


ms mar, you bless me with the depth of your thoughts, and the warm of your replies, thanks babe
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-05-13 06:00 AM


some days it's just better to feel than to respond in words~~

M

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