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Rejoicing
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Rejoicing |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Rejoicing The morning seems so empty, dark and cold Without your warmth to chase the morning chill. Another day of loneliness unfolds Apart from you again against my will. And yet this morning differs from the rest, As soon we’ll claim the prize of patience kept. The surety of love confessed, supressed Is sure reward for tears discreetly wept. Hungering to taste the fruit forbidden, At last to be forbidden nevermore, We’ll feast on love that can’t remain hidden Unleashing every passion held in store. No reservations left nor any doubts, The world must hear rejoicing in our shouts. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
David, Should this be a poem of heart, then I hope all goes well, for everyone. Yet, I could hear the pain within. Nothing but pride goes before a fall.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
moving write...loved this line best: "As soon we’ll claim the prize of patience kept." |
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