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Open Poetry #42

Sarah and I

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-05-10 12:11 PM

Sarah's hands gently touch mine
as we hold each other tight.

She calms me
whenever I am angry
and she gives me
a faint light of hope.

She fills my heart up
with the liquid that is love
soon my heart will overflow
but it doesn't really matter to me.

Her voice vibrates in my ears
with the smoothness of a paino.

Her touch gives me the love
That I've been wanting for a long time.

Sarah,
I just want to say
I love you.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-10 09:04 PM

Yo Angel,

This is very well composed. It's nice to see something that is well written here. Keep up the good work.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-05-10 09:30 PM

Thanks Bobby :]]]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-05-11 10:59 AM

Candid and tender love declaration!

Love,
Margherita

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