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Doesn't even realize
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Doesn't even realize |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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A woman strains for a piece of happiness can't seem to filter through the noise to separate fashion from beauty importance from petty she doesn't even realize she's pretty We are after all a collection of our choices superimposed upon a frail genetic frame So few listening the cacophony of voices does not communicate except to the insane A man discovers greatness where he least expects nurtures to fruition something grand The greatest part of himself focused in on scheming he doesn't even realize he's dreaming We are after all a collection of our choices wrapped around a frail genetic frame so few are free to give... this consummate society has little left to take but this we'll do and in God's name I like this ending better. Rick Delmonico |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Nice work...enjoyed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You manage to tap in to the human spirit, however fragile it may be, you expose it in an honest to goodness light. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We are after all a collection of our choices superimposed upon a frail genetic frame Yea that!!! |
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