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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Oh soft spoken, kind and gentle man... Can't you see her needs? She needs strong arms to hold her She needs strong words to keep her She needs strong deeds to protect her Gallant and Brave and Chivalrous Surprising and Sensual and Romantic Someone who can't keep their hands to themselves Someone besides herself, to initiate love Someone who will curl up in soft sheets with her, while the morning sun peeks through the window She has never exhaled She longs to be a WOMAN Soft and warm and safe and loved She cries herself to sleep, wondering if she will ever get to feel this way again She should never have been doing your job She doesn't want to be the disciplinarian She doesn't want to be the man She doesn't want any of it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Bravissima, dear Tina!! You are soooooooo right. Just this morning I heard really surprising statistical data ... the world is upside down. The men you describe are becoming rare. I have two colleagues who have 19 year old sons whose thoughts dwell on how to get rid of their hair on their legs and other such things ... We must get all the men here to read your VERY IMPORTANT poem!! Love, Margherita  |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks so much. I agree they are becoming harder to find. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I want some of our men to reply to this great write!!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
helloooooooooooooooooooooo men?! Where are they?? Maybe they read secretly and feel guilty? |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
Yes men do need to read this. They want to know what a women wants? Its all right there. Wonderfull writting "Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Tina- You have captured every womans desires well. And I too have no desire to sit on the other side of the fence. What a pleasure to read. sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I will not tire to send this one to the top ... love |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Tina, I think this man doesn't exist...Don't long too much...I will take the plane tomorrow... friendly yann |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
"Don't long too much...I will take the plane tomorrow..." hehe.. Thanks for all of the replies everyone. |
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