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Dawn's gift
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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* Dawn dances over your sleepy eyes. Hush falls off the night gathering upon your lips. I hear it scream there it calls my name too, so I slowly bend over you and quietly kiss it off, in a lingering session of blissful perception of the beauty of you. * [This message has been edited by Margherita (05-09-2008 09:04 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh lovely!  |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Very beautiful, Margherita! I love the dawn as a new awakening, whether in the tenderness of a kiss, or just the light upon my eye telling me I am alive! Well done! Art |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow, Margherita! Okay, here's another "Wow". Loved it! Helen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There [is] that noise between dark and dawn... how beautifully you brush away the cobwebs of fear.. Wonderful! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
M- To linger is to inhale time in measured breaths. Your words are delightful and so true! Indigo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita the Sensuous Senorita, I love the blissful beauty of this intimate moment. Thank you for sharing!  Sending lots of love, Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, love is in the house when you write like that. Very lovely poem . yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful Margherita...James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my! That is lovely Margherita. Wonderful visuals and sounds to read into. Much enjoyed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, Funny thing, that's what my wife would do when I screamed at night. She always held me down first. Bobby |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh my, what a nice way to be woken to another day. I'm lucky if I wake up to one of my cats licking my face. Beautiful Margherita, really beautiful. Rich |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, Lovely, just simply lovely and loving. I enjoy your writing - it always makes me feel peaceful inside. You are a gift. Love, Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To wake up and find all your warm replies is a very lovely start into this new day! Thank you all from my heart. Love and may you all enjoy a spectacular week-end. Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Just lovely Margherita! ARCTIC WIND |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Quite the romantic you are, miss....very beautiful! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
just the right touch. it is wonderful,sublime and serene clever talks delay friendship! |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
hello Rick Delmonico |
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