Open Poetry #42 |
rent town usa |
Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
It was half past don't give a damn and close to what the hell that the shadow of white-line fever crept across that asphalt jungle taking her back to new smell leather and dreams of mosey town where sippin's for sissies and every word is drunk with possibilities. Indigo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Clever write! Very enjoyable. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very very extraordinary with a twist of dark |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
really good. I like the first and last stanzas best. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Diamond- So glad you enjoyed my ramblings. :-) IG- You know how that twist of dark gives things a whole new flavor. Thanks for dropping by. SD- Those were my favorites too! Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, nice to see you spreading your thoughts here, enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Remarkable write! Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Dear D- Glad to be spreading something... *grin* Thanks for the touch. Margherita- Thanks for the kind words! Indigo |
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