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Just Desserts |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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I watched you as your lips encased my offering so sweet As drips of silken honey softly fell upon your feet It oozed out from the corners of your ruby colored lips The tremulous sensations undulating from my hips You peered behind your lashes as your eyes began to roll I savored every moment right down to my very soul I smelled my favorite flavor as I started heading south You pushed onto my tongue and deep within my waiting mouth We both were locked in ecstasy and trembling with delight Every muscle shuddered as we moved throughout the night We finally reached our peak and coasted slowly to a stop Finally at our destination on the mountain top I don’t think I will soon forget that bicycle for two Sharing a banana split that night just me and you! Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Whoaaaa....just gonna say this was KOOL, my friend....but watch out when the female wings fly here... j. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Written! ARCTIC WIND  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You naughty little boy! You really had me going and coming! ~ or is that coming and going?!? At least I got to cool off with that banana split!   Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
LOL Linda! Naughty? Hey, thanks for noticing. Rich  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks Jimmy and Artic. Sorry it was just, dessert. Rich |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Well I was certainly lead down the garden path, guess my minds been spending places it shouldn't. Loved the ending made me laugh. sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LOL!!! oh Richy Rich you are very good!!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now, dear Richy, that was some ride! It's joyful and captivating ... again I would say that "under those circumstances" I could have done without the banana split, to dance LIGHT. Yes, you are entertaining us with passion! Love, Margherita |
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