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Until the Demise of Then
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Until the Demise of Then |
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William James Junior Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 31Ohio |
This is one of my favorites. Until the Demise of Then You might not know that I love you if I don't say it once or twice a year But I do anyhow more than I say so Even though it's what you want to hear That you care for me in those little things you do asking not for thanks or glory But patiently go about doing small chores while listening to my uninteresting story Would I bedeck you with jewels on rings or take you to places of beautiful views I'm glad that you are happy to stay with me and say that I'm the man that you'd choose It's a good thing that you don't require a trip or fur or heavy gold necklace 'round your neck Since I haven't the money now nor is it likely to fall into my hands by fortune's misstep All I have are the words that I can write and say to you under guise of my pen I love you today and into tomorrow too forever from now until the demise of then |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I didn't see ya before! WELCOME TO PIP!  ARCTIC WIND  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I love you today and into tomorrow too forever from now until the demise of then" The one to whom these words are penned should surely cherish them...nice write |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Great Poem. Loved your consistent use of structure and your ryhme scheme was very talented. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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