Open Poetry #42 |
Diablo Dreams! |
gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
He falls asleep; he dreams. Soon, he screams! I think he’s awake, but on another take, he’s sound asleep, deep in the dark of a little, bad boy’s Diablo dreams! |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
For my illustrious grandson, 3, and his distinguished cousin, 18 months! Art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Art, You've nailed it down. I still do that. It's those bad-boy dreams that does it. Nice poem BTW. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cute write and title, dear Art! I love watching the children in their sleep, it's clear that they are dreaming even if they are not screaming. Love, Margherita |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Thanks, Bobby and Margherita! Posting this, and receiving your comments made my day! Art |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is so cute. I guess people knew how to keep us on the strait and narrow back in the day. I'm getting my little granddaughter tomorrow. I've decided we are going to make play dough. If I survive maybe I'll write about it. Ida |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Please survive, Ida! In addition to reading the poem, we want you around for a long long time! Art |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Remember when we were young, my brother, Chuck, would do that...Scream in his sleep! Wow! Scared the be-daddlin out of me every time. We slept in the same bed, you know, and talk about rude awakenings... Course I wasn't much help I guess cause he'd screamed even louder when I'd push is butt off onto the floor! Hah! Scream in my ear!!! jimmy |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
mmmhmmm Enjoyed! ARCTIC WIND |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Thank you muchly! Jimmy, and O thou ubiquitous, Arctic Wind! Have a nice day! Art |
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