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gilead
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0 posted 2008-05-07 04:23 PM


He falls asleep;
he dreams.
Soon, he screams!
I think he’s awake,
but on another take,
he’s sound asleep, deep
in the dark
of a little, bad boy’s
Diablo dreams!


© Copyright 2008 arthur chapman, jr - All Rights Reserved
gilead
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1 posted 2008-05-07 04:25 PM


For my illustrious grandson, 3, and his distinguished cousin, 18 months!  

Art

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-07 04:28 PM


Yo Art,

You've nailed it down.  I still do that.  It's those bad-boy dreams that does it.

Nice poem BTW.

Bobby

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-05-07 04:33 PM


Cute write and title, dear Art! I love watching the children in their sleep, it's clear that they are dreaming even if they are not screaming.

Love,
Margherita

gilead
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4 posted 2008-05-07 04:40 PM


Thanks, Bobby and Margherita! Posting this, and receiving your comments made my day!

Art

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-05-07 04:53 PM


This is so cute. I guess people knew how to keep us on the strait and narrow back in the day. I'm getting my little granddaughter tomorrow. I've decided we are going to make play dough. If I survive maybe I'll write about it.
                           Ida

gilead
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6 posted 2008-05-07 05:14 PM


Please survive, Ida! In addition to reading the poem, we want you around for a long long time!

Art

jwesley
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7 posted 2008-05-07 09:44 PM


Remember when we were young, my brother, Chuck, would do that...Scream in his sleep!
Wow! Scared the be-daddlin out of me every time.  We slept in the same bed, you know, and talk about rude awakenings...

Course I wasn't much help I guess cause he'd screamed even louder when I'd push is butt off onto the floor!

Hah! Scream in my ear!!!

jimmy

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-05-07 10:18 PM


mmmhmmm Enjoyed!



ARCTIC WIND

gilead
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9 posted 2008-05-08 10:07 AM


Thank you muchly! Jimmy, and O thou ubiquitous, Arctic Wind!

Have a nice day!

Art

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