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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Now Inadvertently Even in dreams— I call other women By your name . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As you call it a "Faux pas" those other women may have reason to be jealous ... This says so much. It means her name MEANS much to you. Beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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jmjovies Junior Member
since 2008-05-03
Posts 32florida |
oops still i like the way you write the confession |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ouch...very nicely done...but ouch |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
... also means you may be --- bobbitted --- come morning... did like the way you did this.... j |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
That's because she's incomparable! Right? Just don't be calling her by other women's names---inadvertently, or otherwise! Enjoyed this immensely! Art |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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