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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-05-06 03:15 PM


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Vaguely
An open field
A meadow
A small hill

Perhaps
The sky was blue
The grass green
With many flowers

Were there some kind
Of birds sparrows
Among the leaves
Fluttering from
Tree to tree

When or where
Whether it
Was warm or cool
I don’t recall

What does it matter
That the figure beside me
Rarely spoke at all
As if hardly needing to

It was you
That much I know


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-06 04:46 PM


If it does not matter for you, it means you enjoyed silent communication and that too is a gift.

I perceive peace in this, the hour yes, but also the closeness, even in silence.

Love,
Margherita

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

2 posted 2008-05-28 11:15 AM


I like this one!!!!!!!
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