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Trails of longing
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Trails of longing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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* Trails of longing Oh, god, I see you in the clouds ... and in whatever else my eyes behold. Airborne on eagle’s wings I drift upon soft air streams that steer me out of stifling ties into limitless fields of freedom where dreams are healing tools. My thoughts then turn to only you, my lungs fill with your breath of life, your velvety voice charms my ears, deep longing diffuses in my mind, the vacuum in my solar plexus sighs. Within the secrecy of my inner eyes you plunge into my creative space. You know my heart’s desires, I let you play the leading role in this game of love we perform. In freefall we aim at our one soul, we adorn it with our wants and smiles and make it our hush-hush playground. Lips part and seek the touch to sip honey from our newly sprouted soul flowers. Tremulous trails of longing arch like snakes to the sound of a flute and slowly fade ... * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, This works beautifully for me. I like your musings in the air. You cover quite an array of sensations. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your beautifully discriptive thoughts and words, Margharita. Ida |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This was so soothing to read. The image of finding completeness and fulfilling our dreams was beautifully expressed sharyn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A joy to read...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Awww, Margherita - you are beautiful and your poetry breathes soul. Love, Alison |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"the vacuum in my solar plexus sighs." nodding mine turned out to be my gallbladder, but what wrecked it was my attempts to fill it with bad things. You are our poet mesmerist, dear Margherita. just lovely...  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You know, Margherita, yes, you do know, whereas I'm just beginning to know that I know. And I know that you know what I mean. Your words so well constructed always enlighten and I thank you so much for that.Hugs Helen |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Like a rare, airy dream that leaves the heart light! This is wonderful poetry! Art |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita, there is divine magic in the words you write. "Oh, god, I see you in the clouds ... and in whatever else my eyes behold." ~ I do so know whereof you speak, dear kindred spirit.   Angelo Terrestre |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Margherita, what a beautiful soul you are. You simply breathe life into everything you see, and touch. Your poem left me on the trail, longing for more. And thank you for all of your support whenever, I am here. How fortunate I am to know you. Rich |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very wonderful Margherita! I am happy that you are posting again, I sure did miss those master pieces from Marghertia!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much my dear friends, every single reply warmed my heart.  Love, Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita, I totally share the feelings of your absolutely beautiful poem, Enjoyed the photography too. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Merci, cher ami Yann! Margherita |
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