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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-05-05 04:44 AM



Soon My Darling

I miss the woman that
I love night and day.
While thinking of her
I hear a piano play.
Come Moonlight Sonata
and embrace my heart,
soothe me gently
while we're apart.

Off in the distance,
seems so far away
thinking of my sweetheart,
I hear a cello play.
I know she hears it too,
"Soon my darling you'll
be with me and I'll
be with you."

JamesLee
05May
2008

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-05-05 05:42 AM


ooh music and your sweet suziepie James.. they go very nice together   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-05-05 07:59 AM


You choose a lovely way to communicate, dear James, the music of love is surely heard by lovers who are apart.

Such love filled thoughts you share. Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

William James
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since 2008-05-05
Posts 31
Ohio
3 posted 2008-05-05 01:47 PM


I like how you mix music with emotions.
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-05-05 03:11 PM


There is nothing like good music to soothe the souls of those who hold so much in common, especially when those two souls are apart...nice write
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2008-05-05 03:16 PM


Soon my darling . . . oops, sorry james, forgot the quote marks...nice write...enjoyed,

jimmy

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
6 posted 2008-05-05 03:22 PM


The music is generated in the hearts of the lovers! There is profound beauty here, spoken in an elegant way.

Art

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
7 posted 2008-05-05 03:51 PM


It seems you have found someone to share your heart's song.  May your music play sweetly
sharyn

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