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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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If I could see through an angels eyes would I see me... dancing... with two left feet...??? Or stepping gently on the toes of the opposite foot?? Would I witness forced fears,, without loving care?? If I could shed an angels tears that wipe our slates clean would I then be an angel my king??? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even if you were to have two left feet, I would wager that your king would still be an angel through his eyes.  EA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, if you were dancing with me, my friend, for sure you'd see left feet - mine beneath the 'right'ones (I suspect) of yours. Ejoyed this piece...though it's a question I cannot answer - till we dance. jimmy |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
of all the 'ifs' that could be, this one is definitely worth considering...nicely written |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you for the comments..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Angel4aKing- You used introspection well in this poem. It left me with questions of my own. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are an angel |
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