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Of Dreams |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Of Dreams Sweet Dear of Mine, Bleeding bite of my lips Hallowed tears of stolen rain, my sea, my motionless ocean I wish your skin could hear the sounds That you, the bird of water, Melody of the silent song, Are, the sigh in my heart Taste the fragrance of design And hold my shadow Against the shore of your smile And bend into the last chance Where the river pounds, Through the sprawling dam, With the pulse of darkness overhead And, the blinking eyes, Of ancient suns Let the ardent balm Of our passion’s mist Trapped in dance Meld and braid into one As it lifts into the night Of imagination Escaping desires We’ve yet to admit And skirting fidelity That you are, My poem of dreams |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Looks like your muse is delivering, Richy. I think us night owls do our best work in the wee hours. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and beautiful poems of dreams you have Richy... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yeah now if i could only teach her how to type too, then I could take a nap. What time is it anyway lol. Thank you Ida, it's nice and quiet in the hours of wee isn't it. (did I just say hour of ... okay I'm going to bed now lol) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you Roniece, what a wonderful name you have. I very much appreciate it. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Richy- beautiful imagery you have evoked in this poem. I enjoyed it very much. sharyn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Richy! I sighed with each and every poetically romantic line I read! Captivating! Bravo!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, Richy, your muse found you in great shape and profited to whisper delightful sparks of beauty for you to develop and share. Fantastic write! Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ 'Against the shore of your smile' *sighable* for sure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
WOW! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, this is a jewel, Richy~ Your words practically swirl in the mist and float off the page. So, so pretty~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sharyn ~ Thank you, you’re support has been so appreciated. Linda (EA) ~ You sighed huh? Well now you know what I go through every time I read one of your poems. As always, thank you so much. Margherita ~ You just always have the most charming things to say. Thank You so much. Marge ~ Big hug to you too. Linda (TD) ~ That was the most anyone has ever said to me, with such few words. Thank You. Lori ~ What a beautiful way you have of saying things. I’m so glad I’m back, and that you’re back here too. Thanks again everyone! |
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