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Last Night
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Last Night |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Last Night Climbing up to the top of evening On and above the steep roof of dark I peered out and saw you in your Lighted dream of tomorrow Falling through a sky of blue bricks As I swam down to bottom’s ledge I found you safe, resting among the willows So you woke me and we walked inside a river of cold smoke and back down the slippery wet rooftop where we cuddled, under dank blankets, of time, for a few more eternities, once again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like a dream within a dream. One you can't get away from, and one you never want to leave. So nice to read you again, Richy~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice imagery! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very good Richy...especially the second read, really liked this. jimmy |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
J. very ethereal Liked the mood you set with your phrasing. sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Richy!!!! Now that is a wonderful Sunday surprise, to find you back here on Pip!! I often wondered ... and missed you. Welcome back! This is a magical piece of poetry, an absolute keeper! Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Lori, so nice to see you again, you’ve been really missed. I’ve been trying to catch up on some of the great poetry since I’ve been gone. Wow, there’s a ton. Maybe we can write something together sometime? I’ll be on the corner of archive, and memory lane if anybody needs me. Thank you Dixie, your support is never ending around here, and I appreciate that. Thanks Jimmy, especially for reading it twice. It was just some weird thought I was having yesterday. It’s nice to see you’re still here, and to hear your kind words again. Sharyn, thanks so much for stopping in, I see you’re new here. Well don’t plan on ever leaving. This great place, and these wonderful souls, will draw you back, even if you try. Believe me. Oh Margherita, so nice to see you too. Yep, I sailed off on the sea of blue pages, but the winds always seem to take you back to the places you miss the most. As always, thank you for your kind words. Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your poetry is new to me, Richy, but it is quickly becoming something I look forward to. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I do like your dreams Richy... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so many clever and well thought out images...truly a beautiful 'mindscape' you have painted |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You paint your poems with beautiful pictures. I love the visual gifts that you give me. Thank you, Alison |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Ida, Roniece, stevenr, and Alison, thank you all so much for all of your support. You are all, so wonderful! Rich |
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