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For Sarah |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
When I look at her my eyes see something else something out of the norm something different. When I look at her I see a girl and her love is visible through the mirrors of her soul. She is my everything. She is the key to my closed heart and slowly the key is opening this heart and letting in the emotion that can absolutely help me. I love her and she loves me and I will see her with the same mirrors she uses soon enough but for right now I am still developing. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, This is well organized, and grammatically very fine--good work. Say hello to Sarah for me. Bobby |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thank you Bobby, I will make sure to say hi to her for ya :] |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
very sweet tribute to a special person. I am glad you realize it takes time to love to its fullest. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Angel.. this is a great write.. say hi to Sarah for me too... I think you are both lucky to have each other...  love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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