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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2008-05-03 06:25 AM



it is those saturday afternoon mornings
no hurry needed kind of shirt on
loose fitting like your eyes

when you look back to some 101
going north but wanting more
something cross country with windows down

and no one else around except strangers
that would rather watch you dance
than the sunsets do their magic

and you wonder if I have it on also
not tucked in, leaving it easy out
and open for your fingers to entertain

that close to my heart skin's welcome
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daark

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shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
1 posted 2008-05-03 09:15 AM


As always seductive and intriguing.  I love to read both the lines and inbetween them.  A Pleasure as always
sharyn

Clang
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since 2005-12-15
Posts 222

2 posted 2008-05-03 09:20 AM


Oh I would love to be going north on Hwy 101 right now!  WIndows down and a latte...now that would be a perfect morning.  Great visuals...
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-05-03 09:24 AM


ms shyvl, thank you for the between the lines view


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ms Clang, it is a bit marinelayerish, but the chill is soothing...windows down on a harley? hmmmmmm thanks ms

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-05-03 12:39 PM


Now you've got me wanting....coffee, with cream and lots of sugar, sugar.

It's my poison of choice these days, well, one of em anyway!
And you make it hard to resist.

Nice ride, DS~

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2008-05-03 01:41 PM


ms bluezy, thanks for the sip and smile...
jmjovies
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since 2008-05-03
Posts 32
florida
6 posted 2008-05-03 01:46 PM


this slays me
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2008-05-04 07:03 AM


mmmmm... I like this Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2008-05-04 07:16 AM


jm friend, thank you for reading


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ms r&b, thank you for the eyes babe

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
9 posted 2008-05-04 08:53 AM


quote:
and no one else around except strangers
that would rather watch you dance
than the sunsets do their magic



Lovely longings!
Dancing in controluce would just
be the double gift, yes?

Enticing!

Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
10 posted 2008-05-05 06:07 AM


ms mar, thanks babe, you smile me
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