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Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2008-05-03 12:40 PM

In the soot of dreams
you awoke

And, I kissed you

As I knelt upon a star
and held you,
from afar

Clinging onto opened
doors you called my name
as you floated down
waterfalls

of frozen flames

but, my eyes wouldn’t yell
and my heart wouldn’t swell
and still somehow
to you,

I came

Like jagged waves
splitting bone
on the lost bank
you, the spot of leopards
and, sharp hair of night
fall through me
high in the cellar of
granite windows
looking out, at the
cold fire of heart
you, beside me,
inside me,
are
my wind of truth

You, are,
my earth of life

Freedom of expression is our, write.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2008-05-03 04:41 AM

I really love the imagery! Great job.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

2 posted 2008-05-03 05:02 AM

Good work. I loved the flow of the images and the word breaks. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-05-03 08:40 AM

Hi Rich

it's so good to see you writing again

beautiful words!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2008-05-03 11:15 AM

Richy...hi! It's really good to see you. Your poem is passionate and has excellent choice of words and images. Much enjoyed!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2008-05-03 06:08 PM

Thanks so much for taking the time Munda, it’s very nice to meet you.

Thank you Shyvl, yeah, word breaks can be a little tricky, can’t they. I really appreciate the reply, so nice to meet you.

Hi Dixie, I remember many a late night it would be just me and you, and a few others keeping an eye on things around here, till the day shift arrived, for work lol. Thanks so much for the comments. Very nice to see you again.

Dear Martie, I hope you and yours are very fine and well. Thanks for the kind words, it’s always special to hear from you.

Freedom of expression is our, write.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-05-05 01:08 AM

Lovely word painting, Richy.

A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-05-05 02:54 AM

quote:
you, beside me,
inside me,
are
my wind of truth

Dear Richy, this is awesome!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2008-05-05 05:37 AM

Rich... this is just so wonderful - I'm enjoying your beautiful talent on our pages blue... thank you .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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