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THE VERY LAST TIME
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THE VERY LAST TIME |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
If you knew it was the last time, what would you do? If you knew this was the last hug, how long would it last The last time you said I love you, would you say more If only you knew it was the last time Life is like that, we all say, life is too short Live your life as if today was the last day of your life Why don't we do that? Do all humans suffer from memory loss Do we forget that today might be the very last time The very last time And if this is the last time What do you want that memory to be Your very last hug Your very last kiss The last time you spoke What would you want those words to be? Pepper |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Excellent, I would want my last words to be, Sarah, I love you, please don't forget me. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Very wise words. Pleasure to read sharyn |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Yes Pepper, I do believe all humans suffer from memory loss… This is truly beautiful thank you for writing it and sharing it… Tammy<333 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
We do need to remember this always. You don't know, each day, each hour, if you will never have the chance again to see someone, to say the right thing.. Somehow it is hard to always do this . Good reminder. |
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