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rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-04-30 05:27 AM

I've become an instrument for you
Please tell me what to do
But don't sell me nothin new
And don't be true please don't be true

This is what I see flashin and crashin
in the eyes of so many of you
Your Id told you what to do
Your Id told you what was you

You aspired but drew all your endings in blue
So willing to worry you hurry through lovers
Who's faces still change with each flip of the covers
You're using too backward but true

Deny me just a bit more truth
While I've still some youth
But don't sell me nothin new
And don't be true please don't be true

Subconsciously assassinated satisfaction
is just another piece of the action
Your Id told you what to do
Your Id told you what was you

Will you ever sift through the madness that you fell into
So willing to worry you hurry through lovers
A face at a time strangers to discover
You're using too backward but true

Rick Delmonico

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-05-01 01:24 AM

Deep and thought provoking very moving.

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

2 posted 2008-05-01 02:17 PM

It was all good the last bit was my favourite thou.

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2008-05-01 11:34 PM

Maybe I'll be a groupie in my next life.

So good on ya!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2008-05-02 12:30 PM

I love a poem with a streak of feral honesty running through it, especially one that's on the verge of going altogether wild.

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rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

5 posted 2008-05-03 10:17 AM

Line 15 should read

Don't call me I'll call you

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-05-03 03:22 PM

enjoyed...

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

7 posted 2008-05-04 12:17 PM

nice work on this. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

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